{"id":296,"date":"2011-04-05T09:43:50","date_gmt":"2011-04-05T16:43:50","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.dianastevan.com\/?p=296"},"modified":"2019-04-05T12:24:50","modified_gmt":"2019-04-05T19:24:50","slug":"more-thoughts-on-writing-rules-2","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.dianastevan.com\/uk\/2011\/writing\/more-thoughts-on-writing-rules-2\/","title":{"rendered":"More thoughts on writing rules"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Paula Renaye, author of The Hardlines Self-Help Handbook www.hardlineselfhelp.com had an interesting response to my earlier post on writing rules. As she said I could post her thoughts, here they are:<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;It&#8217;s funny, we all approach a topic from our experiences and our own lens. When I first started writing, I wrote a 400-page western historical novel without ever reading a book on writing or attending a writer&#8217;s group. I was an avid reader and I just wrote naturally in the way of the books I read. I won writing contests right off\u00a0 the bat and then got involved in a writer&#8217;s group&#8211;Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers&#8211;and started learning that there were rules and I wasn&#8217;t following them.<\/p>\n<p>Well, of course, I wanted to get published so I tried to adapt my writing. It killed my creativity and it took a long time to come back from it.\u00a0 In fact, it took doing something I swore I would never do&#8211; write in first person&#8211;to really snap me out of it.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;m glad I know the rules, but I don&#8217;t fixate on them and I will never ever write in the Dwight Swain or Jack Bickram way as I tried to. It&#8217;s just not me. Nope. You read my fiction books and you will find run-on sentences that go on for days because that is how one character speaks. I&#8217;ve had a couple of bad reviews on my books through the years and they were typically from literary types that were appalled at my characters, setting and dialogue. The reviews I value the most are the ones where people write and complain they nearly choked to death by taking a drink at the wrong time when reading. I love those!<\/p>\n<p>When I taught writing workshops, the very first thing I would do is explain that I didn&#8217;t care if you were a good writer and could craft perfect sentences, what I cared about was whether or not you could tell a good story. So, yeah, I do encourage people to forget about &#8220;writing&#8221; and just &#8220;tell the story.&#8221; If you&#8217;re rewriting a sentence, paragraph, or chapter over and over, you are not busy storytelling&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>I love what Paula has to say about this, and hope you do, too.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Paula Renaye, author of The Hardlines Self-Help Handbook www.hardlineselfhelp.com had an interesting response to my earlier post on writing rules. 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